Something i drew by hand at first to pass the time....
Turned into something i couldn't stop working on in college, Curses to college haveing PSP 9 installed.
Anyway, i started just messing round after a while, just using effects on duplicate layers and trying out different backgrounds and stuff. By the end i thing the PSP file has about 8 or 9 layers soley just for backgrounds. i stuck with the on i got on now cos it was just the simplist out of them all.
Now all i need to do is think of something else i can have a good go at (like thats gonna happen sometime this year)
Well darn, I tried to change my window to change the song and accidentally hit the submit button. Well, sorry about that! Here are the crits, though:
shadow's hands seem a bit off, especially (his) left. It looks too small, even if it's behind him. I'd suggest trying to make it about.... three fourths bigger, or make his right hand smaller. Or both, actually... despite the Sonic style typically dealing with out of proportion body parts. His head's perfect, and his shoes are really well done. His mouth however seems to be a bit too far back, try moving it closer up to his face, so it doesn't look like an off-mark. The body's perfect, but seems a bit too big for Shadow's head, and seems to be overlapping it. Try to aid this by making the body smaller and moving Shadow's head more to the right and lower, to fit more on his shoulders better. His right arm also looks like it's not connected to his body. Aid this by simply erasing some of the lines near his shoulder.
Aside from that, I simply LOVE the way you added the Sonic Battle style! You did it best on his shoes. Fantastic job, and keep it up! I'm gonna go check out more of your stuff now..
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shadow's hands seem a bit off, especially (his) left. It looks too small, even if it's behind him. I'd suggest trying to make it about.... three fourths bigger, or make his right hand smaller. Or both, actually... despite the Sonic style typically dealing with out of proportion body parts. His head's perfect, and his shoes are really well done. His mouth however seems to be a bit too far back, try moving it closer up to his face, so it doesn't look like an off-mark. The body's perfect, but seems a bit too big for Shadow's head, and seems to be overlapping it. Try to aid this by making the body smaller and moving Shadow's head more to the right and lower, to fit more on his shoulders better. His right arm also looks like it's not connected to his body. Aid this by simply erasing some of the lines near his shoulder.
Aside from that, I simply LOVE the way you added the Sonic Battle style! You did it best on his shoes. Fantastic job, and keep it up!
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